Fast-food companies should not be allowed to give away free toys with their food. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Free plaything
that is
given to customers along with their cuisines is a selling techniques to increase sales for the company;
in contrast
, the company was interested and taken care their consumers, nowadays they are only interested their profit which rises and dips depending on their sales.
Therefore
, it is imperative that they should not be permitted to attract children by giving toys with their dishes as
this
will increase the consumption of unhealthy foods. In my opinion, the companies must not be permitted to serve the dishes along within toys. Children are not immature enough to decide the company manipulation is conducting to sell unhealthy products. Because of the attraction of toys, children avoid consuming the healthy feed, opt to eat unhealthy food
such
as french fries and high sugar drinks.
As a result
, high-calorie consumption over a period of time results in weight gain, obesity and other medical ailments.
Similarly
, an unhealthy body leads to unhealthy mind and when
this
happens on a large scale, productivity and quality of a nation’s capital decrease,
although
there is a petty chaos but its results are not few.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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