Every year, more and more students choose to study online rather than attend classes on campus. Why are students choosing to study online? What can universities do to attract students back to campus?

Studying online is becoming increasingly popular. Each year, more students wish to
online as opposed to attending classes on campus.
essay will discuss why
is happening and put forward several solutions for
and foremost, many students are increasingly studying online because of the convenience factor. It is an easy job for one to
from home rather than going to
each day. Recent research states that " every 3 members out of  5 members prefer to online studies". One travelling from one flip of the city to another makes extremely inconvenient to attend classes living nearby to the
, in a hostel. Makes it expensive. 
, technology on demand to
, people will seldom attend classes wherever they are whenever they want. The secondary reason students are selecting online
over in-class
over because of the effectiveness it has. Every day there are improvements in online teaching which improve traditional classroom techniques,
for instance
, on-demand video allows the student to play and pause the video they can remember it as many times as required for the advanced equipment in technology E and A playback these technologies are developing rapidly and are improving effect of classroom-based learning.  Despite the Rapid development of Technologies and outgoing of students from on-campus classes, they are several measures to remit their issue
firstly they
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firstly, they
better stop broadcasting the lecture
secondly they
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secondly, they
could improve and increase on-campus resources
they could improve most on a campus community. These measures would help the
bring students back to class.In conclusion, the
should take several measures to bring students back to class rather than choosing e-learning.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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