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Universities should allocate the same amount of money to students’ sports activities as they allocate to their libraries. Do you agree?

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Nowadays there are numerous of universities has myriad magnificent facilities. It is well known that universities must spend the same amount of their money to activities that related to sports as much as they spend it to libraries. I strongly believe that I have the same views with regard to the statement. To start with, as far as I am concerned myriad students in universities are more likely to have social events like sports.
Moreover
, not 100% students in college are always like to study, even though, they are in engineering or even science faculty they must have some amusement as well.
Therefore
, the headmaster must not focus merely on the quality of the library itself, but
also
 on their sports activities. There was a survey conducted by the Ministry of Education in Indonesia to find out whether students in their university life are satisfied or not. The result is surprisingly amazing because many students are happy to study because they still have some sports activities. The
next
, there might be a chance for our college to be a representative place for a certain sport.
In addition
, those possibilities will be happen if our university often held friendly competition.
For example
;
this
 year Sriwijaya University will be the representative place in a soccer competition, because
this
 place often invites many schools or even colleges to engage in their competition. To recapitulate, the headmaster must have the capability to balance sports and educational activities in their institution.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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