The map below shows two proposed sites foe a new adventure company in the Caribbean. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main feature, and make comparisons where relevant.

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This

map depicts

about

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the planning to establish the new adventure company on the Caribbean

island

by having two

site

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sites

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to choose from. Except for the important places, it

also

shows

about

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animal habitats, waterways, and roads.

Site

one locates on the west of the

island

and near the ocean. Above

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S1, there is the biggest town

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this

island

, George Town. Base and Airport place not so far from S1, in the south of the area. There are

also

roads and waterways

locate

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near the

site

. It seems

this

location lives among the

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most importance

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importance

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and the most

advancement

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zone of

this

island

Site

two

place

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places

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the almost

center

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centre

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this

island

. There

also

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is also

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have road and waterway through,

however

There

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there

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has

not

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crucial

settlement

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settlements

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live

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life

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near

beside

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Two Boats Village.

Nevertheless

, its places among the animal habitats

as well as

near the peak more than S1.

Overall

, each

site

has

own

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its own

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benefit, S1 live

nearly

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the big settlement and the airport, and S2 seems to locate among

the

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nature than S1.

Therefore

, the adventure company should decide from

this

information

that

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where is proper to establish their company.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, site with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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4 paragraphs

191 words

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Clear and correct grammar

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