You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter -Explain your situation -Describe your problems -Tell him when you think you can move in.

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Dear

Mr.

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Shah, As you know, I have rented 41, George Avenue from you for six months starting from 1st of August.

However

, I am afraid I am no longer able to move in on that date as my plan has

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due to an urgent business trip. Well, at present, I am working in a company as a

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engineer. We gave an electric machine to Banglore based firm

last

month. And,

from

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they are facing problems with it. Today, in the morning I was informed to visit the company's factory and fix the problem. I am leaving for

banglore

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Bangalore

Banglore

today,

therefore

it is impossible for me

toshift

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to shift

to my new premise on 1st of August. I think moving should be on

last

week of August as I will come back after 15th of August after completing of my work. I will

then

occupy the

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residence

at 41 George Avenue. I hope

this

will not cause you any

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. I am

soory

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sorry

for any inconvenience caused. Yours Faithfully, Sachin

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5Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
12Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

173 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter -Explain your situation -Describe your problems -Tell him when you think you can move in.

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Essentional vocabulary list for IELTS Writing 7+

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 250 words.

It is a good idea for people to continue working in their old age if it is possible for them to do so. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that the government should support the funds for the arts, while some other people suggest that the money should be used for public health and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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