You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to the landlord. In your letter -Explain your situation -Describe your problems -Tell him when you think you can move in.
Dear
Mr.
Shah,
As you know, I have rented 41, George Avenue from you for six months starting from 1st of August. Change the punctuation
Mr
However
, I am afraid I am no longer able to move in on that date as my plan has changes
due to an urgent business trip.
Well, at present, I am working in a company as a Change the verb form
changed
Correct your spelling
project
projet
engineer. We gave an electric machine to Banglore based firm Correct your spelling
project
last
month. And, from
Change preposition
for
last
two Correct article usage
the last
days
they are facing problems with it. Today, in the morning I was informed to visit the company's factory and fix the problem. I am leaving for Add a comma
,days
banglore
today, Correct your spelling
Bangalore
Banglore
therefore
it is impossible for me toshift
to my new premise on 1st of August.
I think moving should be on Correct your spelling
to shift
last
week of August as I will come back after 15th of August after completing of my work. I will then
occupy the resedence
at 41 George Avenue.
I hope Correct your spelling
residence
this
will not cause you any issue
. I am Fix the agreement mistake
issues
soory
for any inconvenience caused.
Yours Faithfully,
SachinCorrect your spelling
sorry
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite