Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways technology has affected the type of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

The technology has affected the way of communication among people nowadays. Modern means of communication are more easy to use and are quicker to deliver any sort of of
message
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the message
. Both these factors are the main reasons for technology’s impact on various relationships. Presently, more than 50% of the world’s population
has
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have
access to mobile phones and
internet
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the internet
, so it has become really easy to call a person sitting 1000 miles away and deliver your
message
directly. Before the introduction of the cell
phones people
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phones, people
used to deliver
message
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messages
via
hand written
written by hand
handwritten
letters with the help of postal services. They had to buy a
letter
paper, write their
message
, put a stamp over the envelope and
then
submit in the post office with an address, whereas today
one
can easily dial a number and contact the other person directly, without even moving from a chair.
For instance
, my uncle used to write letters to his wife and it used to take 3 to 4 hours
from
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for
him to post a
letter
but now he simply video
chats
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chat
with his wife and sons.
Alongwith
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Along with
becoming easier, it has now become quicker to deliver a
message
or a gift. In the mid 90’s, it used to take 3 to 4 days to deliver a
message
/
letter
to the other end and during
this
period of 2 to 3 days situations could change without anyone knowing what’s going on on the other end, but nowadays it takes merely 2 minutes to convey a
message
and make
other person
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other people
the other person
aware of the current situation at
one
end.
This
factor has helped a lot in clearing the misunderstandings among family members.
For example
, before people used to post
letter
3 days before their beloved
one
’s birthday and a gift
atleast
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at least
7 days
before but
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before, but
today
one
waits for
exact
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exactly
12 am midnight and wishes his beloved a birthday, so there are less chances
one
could get late and
also
there are less chances of being misunderstood. I strongly believe that the impact of technology on our daily
life relationships
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life, relationships
with our colleagues, family members and other people, is a positive
one
.

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