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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways technology has affected the type of relationships people make? Has this become a positive or negative development?

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The technology has affected the way of communication among people nowadays. Modern means of communication are more easy to use and are quicker to deliver any sort of of
message
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the message
. Both these factors are the main reasons for technology’s impact on various relationships. Presently, more than 50% of the world’s population
has
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have
 access to mobile phones and
internet
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the internet
, so it has become really easy to call a person sitting 1000 miles away and deliver your
message
 directly. Before the introduction of the cell
phones people
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phones, people
 used to deliver
message
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messages
 via
hand written
written by hand
handwritten
 letters with the help of postal services. They had to buy a
letter
 paper, write their
message
, put a stamp over the envelope and
then
 submit in the post office with an address, whereas today
one
 can easily dial a number and contact the other person directly, without even moving from a chair.
For instance
, my uncle used to write letters to his wife and it used to take 3 to 4 hours
from
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for
 him to post a
letter
 but now he simply video
chats
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chat
 with his wife and sons.
Alongwith
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Along with
 becoming easier, it has now become quicker to deliver a
message
 or a gift. In the mid 90’s, it used to take 3 to 4 days to deliver a
message
/
letter
 to the other end and during
this
 period of 2 to 3 days situations could change without anyone knowing what’s going on on the other end, but nowadays it takes merely 2 minutes to convey a
message
 and make
other person
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other people
the other person
 aware of the current situation at
one
 end.
This
 factor has helped a lot in clearing the misunderstandings among family members.
For example
, before people used to post
letter
 3 days before their beloved
one
’s birthday and a gift
atleast
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at least
 7 days
before but
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before, but
 today
one
 waits for
exact
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exactly
 12 am midnight and wishes his beloved a birthday, so there are less chances
one
 could get late and
also
 there are less chances of being misunderstood. I strongly believe that the impact of technology on our daily
life relationships
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life, relationships
 with our colleagues, family members and other people, is a positive
one
.
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