The graph below shows the pollution levels in London between 1600 and 2000.

This
rendered line chart illustrates the contamination of
sluphur
an abundant tasteless odorless multivalent nonmetallic element; best known in yellow crystals; occurs in many sulphide and sulphate minerals and even in native form (especially in volcanic regions)
sulphur
dioxide
and smoke in the Londan environment between 1600 and 2000. Overall, there
were
Suggestion
was
a similarity between
sulphur
dioxide
and exhaust emission trend in the midst of
year
Suggestion
the year
1600 and 2000. As regards,
sulphur
dioxide
corruption in the
year
1600,
ther
in or at that place
there
their
were 250 micrograms per cubic
metre
, whereas smoke pollution was slightly more than zero. After 100 years, between 1700
ans
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
1750, pollution of
sulphur
dioxide
reached at a peak of about 700 micrograms per cubic
metre
, in
contrarst
the opposition or dissimilarity of things that are compared
contrast
to smoke pollution depicted the 250 micrograms per cubic
metre
emission. Smoke and
sulphur
dioxide
showed a dramatically
incline
Suggestion
inclination
untl
up to, before the time
until
1900, but afterward, there were
continous
continuing in time or space without interruption
continuous
contentious
fluctiation
a wave motion
fluctuation
with
samutanuous
.
plunge
Suggestion
Plunge
before
year
2000.
Moreover
, by
year
Suggestion
the year
2000 both
pollutent
waste matter that contaminates the water or air or soil
pollutant
pollution
pollutants
had a zero
micorgrams
one millionth (1/1,000,000) gram
micrograms
per cubic
metre
of tainting.

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