The chart below gives information about the number of social networking sites people used in Canada in 2014 and 2015.

This
bar chart shows the number of social networking sites visited by internet users Canada in 2014 and in 2015. Overall, we can see from the data that, in general, there
were
Suggestion
was
a growing
thendency
an attitude of mind especially one that favors one alternative over others
tendency
to use more
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
one site.
Although
just over one fifth of internet user
did not use
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was not using
any social
netwroking
an interconnected system of things or people
networking
sites in either of the years, the proportion in
this
category decreased from 22
percent
in 2014 to 21
percent
in 2015. In both years the highest proportion of users in any group fell into the 'one site' Category.
However
,
this
group declined sharply from 36
percent
in 2014 to 28
percent
in 2015. I contrast, the number who reported using two
sites
a group of things of the same kind that belong together and are so used
sets
, three sites, four sites and five sites all grew over
teh
definite article
the
period analysed In both years the proportion of
inernet
a computer network consisting of a worldwide network of computer networks that use the TCP/IP network protocols to facilitate data transmission and exchange
internet
users fell as
teh
definite article
the
number of social networking sites increased, with only 2
percent
using
five sites
Suggestion
the five sites
in 2014 compared to 4
percent
in 2015.

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