The bar chart gives information about the number of car journeys into the city centre made by residents and non-residents.

This
rendered chart illustrates the number of car journeys into the
city
centre
by who live by the town
centre
And non-residents in midst of the year 1996 and 2005. Overall, between 1996 and 1999 residents, most visited the heart of
city
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the city
, whereas, from 2000 to 2002 non-residents did more car journeys into the
city
centre
.
In
Suggestion
At
the start of the era, over 900 residents had a journey to
city
Suggestion
the city centre
centre
per day, whereas, only 5000 non-residents take a road to central
city
and until 1999 there were an up and down in the residents tour but non-residents journeys had a dramatically increase. Afterward, 1999 residents visiting decreased unexpectedly In 2000 to 5000 journeys regularly.
Thus in
Accept comma addition
Thus, in
2004 number of resident visitors reached the
city
centre
was 4000 per day, and slightly less than 4000 for nonresidents. Importantly, between the year 1999 and 2000 parking meters were assembled in the
centre
of
city
Suggestion
the city
.
Therefore three
Accept comma addition
Therefore, three
years later Westgate street and Park lane were forbidden to traffic

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