Govt. should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

The governing body that makes huge plans and sets of
structure invest
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structure, invest
the large
amount
for the benefit of each
individual in healthcare
Suggestion
individual healthcare
, transportation,
communication
and much more. Nowadays, with the rapid growth of population the complications are growing
abruptly especially
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abruptly, especially
when it comes
to commute
Suggestion
to commuting
on daily routine. I completely agree with the notion of spending more on
this
.
Firstly
, some partial
amount
must infuse on
railway system
Suggestion
the railway system
railway systems
to regulate it in a proper way that suits the environment which is
eco
Suggestion
Eco
friendly. Pollution results asthma, skin cancer and many other diseases.
This
also
effect the
green house
a building with glass walls and roof; for the cultivation and exhibition of plants under controlled conditions
greenhouse
gas emission. Each country wants to be a part of “MONTREAL PROTOCOL” policy. Whose aim is to reduce the carbon gas emission as possible and
this
is
only possible solution
Suggestion
the only possible solution
to set a
rail road
compel by coercion, threats, or crude means
railroad
infrastructure so that every citizen wish travel via train.
Secondly
, the commuting via railway as compared to road is
cost
Suggestion
costing
economical and pocket friendly for a person as compared to the fuel cost.
Government
Suggestion
The government
should start new railway infrastructure with rail stations like European countries within a city.
This
would allow each passenger to save from
rush
Suggestion
the rush
and reach the destiny on time.
Finally
,
favoring
promote over another
favouring
only to invest in Railways system will make the situation worse and
this
may not help out in
country’s economy
Suggestion
the country’s economy
a country’s economy
. E.g. Disable, cyclist commute to their destination using their own personal vehicle they can’t use the broken road.
Furthermore
, the logistics services use heavy truck vehicles to provide supply in will be affected. Pakistan’s
communication
roads are well exemplary which require a huge
amount
of investment. The roads showcase the beauty only when the Cricket players from foreign state arrive. Overall, on serious note the Govt.
invest
Suggestion
Invest
the equal
amount
of
share
Suggestion
shares
the share
on the both
communication
systems.
of
Suggestion
Of
shares on the both
communication
systems.

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