The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The tables compare the
sales
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coffee
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bananas
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UK
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Switzerland
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Belgium
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sales
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coffee
rose in all five European countries from Use synonyms
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bananas
saw an increase in three out of five nations. Use synonyms
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bananas
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sales
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coffee
had risen to 20 Use synonyms
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coffee
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also
saw a dramatic increase in the money spent on Linking Words
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bananas
in the Use synonyms
UK
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Switzerland
with revenues rising by 32 Use synonyms
millions
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and 4.5 Use synonyms
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of
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respectively.
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of both products were far lower in Use synonyms
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Belgium
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coffee
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sales
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bananas
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Belgium
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