Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is positive or negative development?
I think it is beneficial that
goods
like food, cars, furniture and clothes that are produced in a certain part of the world
are now available almost everywhere, which means the similarities between various countries
are growing. People
in different regions now have access to products they could not use before. There are numerous goods
that are produced only in certain parts of the world
, which means that people
living in other places could not normally take advantage of them in the past. For example
, bananas and pineapples are grown in tropical countries
and so, did
not use to be available to consumers in colder Wrong verb form
do
countries
like Russia and Canada. Nevertheless
, most people
in such
countries
are now able to buy and eat these beneficial fruits. Furthermore
, people
can now migrate to different countries
with less fear of becoming homesick since the products they are used to are now available in shops wherever they go. For instance
, Iranian immigrants could not cook their national dish, Ghormesabzi, in other parts of the globe because the specific vegetables required were not grown there. However
, as they can access all these ingredients in shops and supermarkets around the world
today, they do not miss a significant part of their cultural heritage anymore, allowing them to work and live more productively. Some may argue that the global spread of similar goods
and the growing similarity between countries
can reduce people
’s motivation to travel to other parts of the world
, decreasing tourism and the revenue it brings to countries
. But I think people
will still travel to see and experience the natural features of other countries
like forests, mountains and wildlife. In conclusion, I believe the growing similarity between countries
around the world
is a desirable development. People
can now take advantage of beneficial goods
from other countries
, and immigrants can be less stressed and more productive.Submitted by rahaniknam on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite