Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children.

Education is a critical task as it leads to
development
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the development
of the beneficiary. A
child
will learn something or the other with every
activity
they perform. So there are different opinions about assignments given at home. Some are in
favor
promote over another
favour
of the task while many are against the system. With increase population and
cut throat
ruthless in competition
cutthroat
competition, schools have designed their curriculum which best fits their students to become a competitive
individuals
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individual
. Much of exertion has been given on extra curriculum activities along with
homework
. It brings tremendous
pressure which
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pressure, which
perhaps is difficult
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is perhaps difficult
for many pupils. Countless parents do not
favor
promote over another
favour
the concept of
homework
, which apparently going to be a burden. It consumes a lot of time and act as hindrance to other social
activity
and playing time, it sounds hard enough to cope with both
activity
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activities
. On the other side, a good number of parents believe that
homework
plays a pivotal role in
development
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the development
of a
child
. When children are assigned with
homework
, they will learn to deal with academic and leisure time and prove themselves to be more efficient than counterparts.
For
instance in
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instance, in
my
city there
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city, there
are schools who pressurize students with both
activity
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activities
as well as home assignments, and statistics have shown a positive response. Summing up with the facts, ultimate output of any
activity
results in
favorable or undesired outcome
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a favourable or undesired outcome
favourable or undesired outcome
.
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.
More pressure with
homework
may turn out fruitful for a student, whilst if not at all may turn a
child
towards laziness. So according to me
considerable amount
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a considerable amount
of
homework
is a significant part of
education system
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the education system
. It will benefit
child
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children
in the future run.

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