NOWADAYS A LARGE AMOUNT OF ADVERTISING AIMED AT CHILDREN SHOULD BE BANNED BECAUSE OF THE NEGATIVE EFFECTS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?
In recent times, the increased exposure of children to advertisements have been questionable. Some people are of the opinion that promotions focusing on under 18 persons should be completely eradicated.
This
essay will explain why this
type of communication should be discouraged.
Firstly
, children are not matured
enough to make decisions based on the Suggestion
mature
advertisments
. It is believed that they a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
advertisement's
easliy
swayed by what they see and are with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
therefore
not able to make the right decison
on promotions. They are still young and need an adult to assist them in making decisions. the act of making up your mind about something
decision
decisions
For instance
, some countries have policies that persons below the age of 18 are not old enough to make decisions partaining
to buying certain products and be relevant to
pertaining
therefore
, this
age bracket are not able to readily access some products. In short, because of the maturity level of kids, it is advisable to stop their access to promotions.
Secondly
, it is believed that promotions can be deceptive. Nowadays, a lot of the content on promotions do not portray the truth on
their products. Some of these contents are simply used to Suggestion
about
decieve
buyers into purchasing the items. be false to; be dishonest with
deceive
For example
, Mcdonalds
portrays their burgers and fries as Suggestion
McDonalds
healthy
Accept comma addition
healthy, however
however
, research show
that these sought of food are very fatty and Suggestion
shows
therefore
unhealthy. Based on this
, it is better to reduce under age
not of legal age
underage
advertisments
in order to stop a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
the driving wrong
messages to Suggestion
driving the wrong
kids
.
In conclusion, Suggestion
the kids
advertisments
aimed at children should not be encouraged because of their deceptive nature and a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
also
the maturity level of the audience. Therefore
, it is advisable child promotions should be banned. It is recommended that the goverment
should make policies to ensure the eradication of type of adverts.the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
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