NOWADAYS A LARGE AMOUNT OF ADVERTISING AIMED AT CHILDREN SHOULD BE BANNED BECAUSE OF THE NEGATIVE EFFECTS. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

In recent times, the increased exposure of children to advertisements have been questionable. Some people are of the opinion that promotions focusing on under 18 persons should be completely eradicated.
This
essay will explain why
this
type of communication should be discouraged.
Firstly
, children are not
matured
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mature
enough to make decisions based on the
advertisments
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
advertisement's
. It is believed that they
easliy
with ease ('easy' is sometimes used informally for 'easily')
easily
swayed by what they see and are
therefore
not able to make the right
decison
the act of making up your mind about something
decision
decisions
on promotions. They are still young and need an adult to assist them in making decisions.
For instance
, some countries have policies that persons below the age of 18 are not old enough to make decisions
partaining
be relevant to
pertaining
to buying certain products and
therefore
,
this
age bracket are not able to readily access some products. In short, because of the maturity level of kids, it is advisable to stop their access to promotions.
Secondly
, it is believed that promotions can be deceptive. Nowadays, a lot of the content on promotions do not portray the truth
on
Suggestion
about
their products. Some of these contents are simply used to
decieve
be false to; be dishonest with
deceive
buyers into purchasing the items.
For example
,
Mcdonalds
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McDonalds
portrays their burgers and fries as
healthy
Accept comma addition
healthy, however
however
, research
show
Suggestion
shows
that these sought of food are very fatty and
therefore
unhealthy. Based on
this
, it is better to reduce
under age
not of legal age
underage
advertisments
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
in order to stop
the driving wrong
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driving the wrong
messages to
kids
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the kids
. In conclusion,
advertisments
a public promotion of some product or service
advertisements
aimed at children should not be encouraged because of their deceptive nature and
also
the maturity level of the audience.
Therefore
, it is advisable child promotions should be banned. It is recommended that the
goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
should make policies to ensure the eradication of type of adverts.
Submitted by Yewande on

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