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What could be done to encourage people to buy local products? An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online?

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There is no doubt that nowadays people prefer online shopping rather than walking in the store to buy them.
online
Suggestion
Online
 browsing has
both
 positive and negative impacts on
both
 particular person and on the business. In
this
 essay I will discuss
both
 aspects with relevant examples to clear the concept.
First
 of all, with improved
technology everything is
Suggestion
technology, everything is
 available online. People are busy with
there
of them or themselves
their
 day to day activities and don't have enough
time
 for themselves. Online shopping is helping people to save their
time
 and energy to specially walk in the store to buy products.
For instance
, Amazon.
ca
Suggestion
CA
, Ebay and many more online shopping sites where you can find everything very
conveniently
Suggestion
convenient
 by just sitting on your sofa and get that delivered in minimum
time
. Technology has
changes
Suggestion
changed
 the way people use to think and online shopping is the biggest example of that. On the other side, with the advantages of online shopping there comes several disadvantages too.
For example
, people are more dependent on online shopping and don't put any efforts to go to the store to buy local products, which is affecting local market businesses in a big
time
.
Moreover
, we cannot always trust online products for expensive products like electronics, clothing and many more. I would like to share my own example of online shopping which I did on wish.
com
Suggestion
Come
Cam
Com
 and ordered mobile phone and after waiting 1 month I just got phone charger. To conclude, I believe online shopping is a great initiative for the people who are busy but there are several disadvantages which are affecting local businesses. There should be equal customers for
both
 online and local market to help
growing
Suggestion
grow
both
 the business.

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