The table below shows information and predictions regarding the change in percentage of the population aged 65 and above in three countries.

The table demonstrates the actual rate of the population over the age of 65 and above in Canada, Germany and UK, for the time of 1988, 2000 and with a rough estimation of the change in data in the year 2030. Overall, by 2030, Germany has the highest increased of its senile people followed by Canada and UK. Population in those 3 countries constantly growing from 1988 until in the near future. During the past span of 1988, total number of old people from the UK is exactly 14.23% and slightly rose about 0.66% in 2020,
however
, it was forecasted that in the breadth of 2030 it will grow sharply in 20.35% in average. Canada
on the other hand
, has 16.32% in 1988 with a marked escalation on number at 20.67% and 26.35% in the term of 2000 and 2030 respectively.
Moreover
, Germany who has the most senile people comparing to other countries acquired 20.45% in 1988 and substantially rose by approximately 4.35% after 12 year time. It was
also
believed that in the period of 2030, it will increase considerably in 5.68%.

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