Discussion the reason why people define happiness differently and how to obtain happiness.

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happiness with different ways.The upcoming paragraphs will discuss the ways to define happiness and how human beings are coming
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of a color at the end of the color spectrum (next to orange); resembling the color of blood or cherries or tomatoes or rubies
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emotions
emotion
and feelings. To be more precise, the folks who's are in extrovert nature, they love to express
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feeling with all because according to them
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happiness is the key of success and if we share with other people
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become happy. Along with it, in
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era people have no more time to spend with friends and family
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, they would love to share with
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family and friends.
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, in Indian people are giving more
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the quality of being important and worthy of note
importance
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the state of being a married couple voluntarily joined for life (or until divorce)
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parties
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invited all their
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realtives
estimated by comparison; not absolute or complete
relatives
and friends to share their peace of mind. On the
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people gain their
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friendly remark said before starting to drink an alcoholic beverage
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unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
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busy schedule They are trying to find the prosperity from their daily heart.
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, the workers are becoming happier when they are getting day off or
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to gain with effort
achieve
achieved
some special rewards from the companies. Along with it, folks looking to
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to gain with effort
achieve
the best goals in
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, so they can
survie
continue to live through hardship or adversity
survive
save
serve
easily in
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justified
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so they can gain the
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a cherished desire
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nation, people have
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unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
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emotions
and feelings in the front of others people. They
always looking
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always look
are always looking
forward to find some
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unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
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