Carn ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty year that many cities in the world are now “one big traffic jam” How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

Over the past three decades, there has been a tremendous increase in the number of vehicles and the roads in most of the cities on
this
planet now looks like a huge traffic jam. In my opinion,
this
statement is true to most of the extent. We, humans got accustomed to luxury that we cannot afford to live without cars.
However
, the
affects
property of a personal character that is portable but not used in business
effects
of excessive usage of cars
is not just limited
Suggestion
are not just limited
to congested
roads but
Accept comma addition
roads, but
also
contributes towards
deterioration
Suggestion
the deterioration
a deterioration
of
environment
Suggestion
the environment
. In the early 1900's when the automobile industry started taking baby steps towards the
manufactuting
the act of making something (a product) from raw materials
manufacturing
of cars and other
automobiles cars
Accept comma addition
automobiles, cars
were considered to be a luxury possession and were only owned by very few rich people in the society.
However
, the scenario has changed completely and cars now have become a basic necessity and most of the people use it for day to day
transportaion
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
. The increased number of
car
Suggestion
cars
means more traffic on the road and more pollution. The
government
can take
initiative
Suggestion
the initiative
and introduce measures to discourage people from using personal transportation. They should build a robust public transportation with frequent services at an affordable fare. There is
also
a need for awareness programs that talk about how vehicles accounts
to
Suggestion
for
one of the primary reasons for air and noise pollution. How our
wild life
all living things (except people) that are undomesticated
wildlife
and
enivironment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
is paying the price for excess usage of fuels that runs our vehicles. The
government
should
also
introduce
carpooling
services which are approved by the
government
where people going to a similar destination can share rides in a single vehicle. One good
initiaitive
readiness to embark on bold new ventures
initiative
initiatives
of
government
that
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
have seen in my life is the establishment of HOV (High Occupancy Vehicles) Lane. These are specific lanes on the roads
where
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
were
only vehicles with two or more passengers are allowed to drive in. These lanes are reserved for
such
vehicles and encourage people to carpool as these lanes are less congested and allows people to reach their destination at a faster pace. I believe, it is quite true that there is an exponential growth in the number of cars that are present on the roads in major cities and it's not just the responsibility of the
government
to control the
vehicles but
Accept comma addition
vehicles, but
also
every single person in
this
worlds
Suggestion
world
as
this
is our planet and we should do everything in our power to save the planet earth as we
dont
do not
don't
have a
second
one.

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