Some parents believe that cell phones are harmful to children, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

In the present world,
cell
phones have been captured lots of attention as well as dependency on it from people irrespective of age and profession around the world. Even, children are not exceptional in the sense that they spend
significant portion
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a significant portion
of time with the device. The
argument
whether
cell
phones are harmful to children or not is an
argument
which is agreed and disagreed
by
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with
many. The two sides of the
argument
will be thoroughly analysed and discussed in the essay before drawing any reasoned conclusion.
Firstly
,
cell
phones can be described as
definite reason
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a definite reason
to different mental and physical problems
to
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in
children.
For instance
, children normally become indulged to
cell
phones and spend hour after hour over phones while they should play on
field
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the field
or read books. Sadly,
this
habit leads to various problems range from growing frustration to eye diseases.
Therefore
,
this
makes it clear that
cell
phones have harmful effect on mental and physical health of children.
However
,
cell
phones have become an important medium for learning as different
youtube
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YouTube
channels, applications give educational service to children as well as other age group people.
For example
, children can get different types of learning, skill development ideas as well as help for their school homework by using
cell
phones. Surprisingly,
cell
phones have increased the scope of learning
to
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for
children.
Thus
, it is a fact that
cell
phones as
phenomenal learning medium
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a phenomenal learning medium
phenomenal learning media
, have
positive impact
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a positive impact
on
children
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children, although
although
there is
chance
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a chance
the chance
that they will be
introduced
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introducing
themselves to pornography, betting by using
cell
phones. To summarize, the two sides of the
argument
concerning whether
cell
phones have
harmful effect
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harmful effects
a harmful effect
on children or not, we can see that
cell
phones having
harmful effect
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a harmful effect
harmful effects
on children has strong supports.
Therefore after
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Therefore, after
thorough analysis of both sides, it is clear that the idea of giving
cell
phones to children to learn cannot be supported. It is
therefore
recommended not to give children
cell
phones at that early
age while
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age, while
they should play outside or read books.

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