The diagrams below show an island before and after the addition of tourist facilities. Summarise the information in the maps and make comparisons where appropriate

The diagram shows an
island
that is
approximately 900 meters wide and 300
meters
Suggestion
Meters
across before and after its development into a tourist resort. 41 Before being developed the
island
was
unpopulated
apart from a few
palm
Suggestion
palms
trees
Suggestion
Trees
and had a beach on the northwest side of the
island
. After development, the
island
has a pier and reception centre built on
its
the thing named or in question
it
southern
Suggestion
Southern
shore.
In addition
, a number of small sailing boats are available for
transport
Suggestion
Transport
or leisure. On the western side of the pier and reception centre is a
small park
Suggestion
A small park
Small park
that
also
overlooks the sea. On the opposite (north) side of the
island
Suggestion
The island
Island
is a combined restaurant and leisure centre. On the western end of the
island
are 8 huts that are close to the beach and
surrounded
Suggestion
Surrounded
by trees. The eastern end of the
island
is protected by trees and
contains
Suggestion
Contains
a group of six huts and a children’s playground.
This
area allows family
groups
Suggestion
Groups
and couples
to have
Suggestion
have
separate areas so they do not disturb each other.

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