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In the past,when students did a university degree,they tended to study in their own country.Nowadays,they have more opportunity to study abroad.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

In olden days students have done their professional degree in their own nation.Nowadays
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the doors of other
country
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's
education
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 system open Infront them. The indoor and outdoor
education
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 systems are entirely different from each other.The changes in environment of study
has
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have
 some influence
in
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on
 the learning outcome.The international studies help the students to learn multiple language.They would get to know the variations in culture and
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
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the people who prefer
study
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studying
 in abroad would adapt these kind of alternations.
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The majority
 of the nation's provide skill based and outcome based
education
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, which give quality improvement.
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, the foreign
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give
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gives
weightage
made heavy or weighted down with weariness
weighted
 for degree
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while hiring job.
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Indian industries or other fields prioritise
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for
 candidates who have graduated from other countries.
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Finally, it
 helps to maintain
bonding
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bonds
 with others.
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,
foreign
education
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 has more
merits
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merits, however
however
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it has some negative impacts on students.They might feel detached from their comfort
zone
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zone, such
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 as, home and friends and it might induce much pressure and tension over them.If the student
donot have
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does not have
do not have
 proper guidance and control
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they would mislead by others rather than achieving
goal
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goals
the goal
a goal
.Though
abroad
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a broad
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provide
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provides
 quality
education
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it might be expensive as the home
country
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 health insurance may not cover abroad or problems related to credit transfer.Even if learn language
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the applicants might get language barrier during the initial days and cultural shock unless until cope with new surroundings. To conclude
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the
education
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 system varies based on
country
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 to
country
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.
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 might have disadvantages whereas, it helps in many ways and both have
impact
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an impact
 on them who study in out of their
country
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

Answer structure for the type of essay

  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

Examples to start your body paragraph:

  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...

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