In the last,when students did a university degree,they tended to study in their own country.Nowadays,they have more opportunity to study abroad.What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

In olden days students have done their professional degree in their own nation.Nowadays
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the doors of other country's
education
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system open Infront them. The indoor and outdoor learning methods are entirely different from each other.The changes in environment of study
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have
some influence in the learning outcomes.The international studies help the student to learn multiple language.They would get to know the variations in cultures and lifestyles.At the same time
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the people who prefer
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studying
in abroad would able to adapt these kind of alterations.Majority of nation's provide skill oriented and outcome based
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which
give
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gives
quality improvement.
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the foreign
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provide
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provides
weightage
made heavy or weighted down with weariness
weighted
for degree
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Indian fields provide more opportunity to candidates who have graduated from other countries.
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assists to maintain
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bonds
with others.
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, foreign
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has more
merits
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merits, however
however
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it has some negative impact on students.They might feel detached from their comfort
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zone, such
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as home
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family, and friends and it might induce pressure and tension over them.If the students
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do not
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they would mislead and deviate rather than
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concentrating
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goal.Though abroad provide quality
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it would be expensive as the home country health insurance may not cover abroad or problems related to credit transfer.Even if learn language
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they might get language barrier and cultural shock unless until they are able to cope with new surroundings. To conclude
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the
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system varies according to places.
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might have disadvantages whereas, it helps in many ways to improve knowledge and skills and both have
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an impact
on them who study in abroad.

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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic

IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.

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  • Introduction
  • Body paragraph 1 – advantages
  • Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
  • Conclusion

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  • The main advantage is...
  • The disadvantage of this...
  • The main benefit...
  • Despite these advantages...
  • One possible drawback...
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