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In some countries at secondary or high school, there may be two streams of study academic or vocational. what are the advantages of students and society of putting students into two streams at the age of 15?

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Ironically, there is no doubt over the verity of the statement that education is just in
today
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today's
todays
 age
.
Accept space
.
 Education widens a person's mental horizon
,
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,
it
assist
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assists
 as a weapon in building up the development of
child
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the child
children
a child
. In several nations
at
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in
 high school, there are two options of study academic and vocational. In my ideology, there are ample of rewards of choosing stream after grade. To feather one's nest, the potential factor behind
this
 is that it
catters
give what is desired or needed, especially support, food or sustenance
caters
coders
scatters
 a chance to scholars to build up their
carrer
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
careers
 according to their interest. It acts as a golden opportunity for pupils
.
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.
 A number of studies
shows
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show
 that children must have to focus on only
few subjects
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a few subjects
 and it
climb
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climbs
 their immunity system few subjects just act as a treasure house of knowledge. Due to
this
, juveniles burn midnight oil to accomplish their target yet, they
also
 do study around the clock. Plethora of subjects
give
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gives
large amount
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a large amount
large amounts
 of burden which is directly linked to stress and frustration. Moving
further
, few books are inversely
propotional
properly related in size or degree or other measurable characteristics; usually followed by 'to'
proportional
proportionate
 to score of learners in each subject which give breeding ground to their talent. It
also
said
express in words
told
 them to save their time. A good illustration of
this
 that pursue university, Indiana reveals that more than half of students give preference to minimum number of books to accomplish their target.
Choice
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The choice
A choice
 between streams
also
 paves a way to hoof economic condition of
country
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a country
 as youngsters are newly
grew
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grown
 up and
also
 have a chance to show their hidden talent.
As a result
, a figure of barriers
are pulled
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is pulled
 down if learners select their stream as their interest
.
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.
 Education is lighter than a sword.
Although
, being a part of society, it is one of both guardians as well as scholars to ponder about their future
.
Accept space
.
 As senior citizens are more experienced yet, students know regarding their interest and future goals
.
Accept space
.
 Yesterday fiction is today's reality.

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