In some countries at secondary or high school, there may be two streams of study academic or vocational. what are the advantages of students and society of putting students into two streams at the age of 15?

Ironically, there is no doubt over the verity of the statement that education is just in
today
Suggestion
today's
todays
age
.
Accept space
.
Education widens a person's mental horizon
,
Accept space
,
it
assist
Suggestion
assists
as a weapon in building up the development of
child
Suggestion
the child
children
a child
. In several nations
at
Suggestion
in
high school, there are two options of study academic and vocational. In my ideology, there are ample of rewards of choosing stream after grade. To feather one's nest, the potential factor behind
this
is that it
catters
give what is desired or needed, especially support, food or sustenance
caters
coders
scatters
a chance to scholars to build up their
carrer
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
careers
according to their interest. It acts as a golden opportunity for pupils
.
Accept space
.
A number of studies
shows
Suggestion
show
that children must have to focus on only
few subjects
Suggestion
a few subjects
and it
climb
Suggestion
climbs
their immunity system few subjects just act as a treasure house of knowledge. Due to
this
, juveniles burn midnight oil to accomplish their target yet, they
also
do study around the clock. Plethora of subjects
give
Suggestion
gives
large amount
Suggestion
a large amount
large amounts
of burden which is directly linked to stress and frustration. Moving
further
, few books are inversely
propotional
properly related in size or degree or other measurable characteristics; usually followed by 'to'
proportional
proportionate
to score of learners in each subject which give breeding ground to their talent. It
also
said
express in words
told
them to save their time. A good illustration of
this
that pursue university, Indiana reveals that more than half of students give preference to minimum number of books to accomplish their target.
Choice
Suggestion
The choice
A choice
between streams
also
paves a way to hoof economic condition of
country
Suggestion
a country
as youngsters are newly
grew
Suggestion
grown
up and
also
have a chance to show their hidden talent.
As a result
, a figure of barriers
are pulled
Suggestion
is pulled
down if learners select their stream as their interest
.
Accept space
.
Education is lighter than a sword.
Although
, being a part of society, it is one of both guardians as well as scholars to ponder about their future
.
Accept space
.
As senior citizens are more experienced yet, students know regarding their interest and future goals
.
Accept space
.
Yesterday fiction is today's reality.

Fully explain your ideas

To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Try other services:

All the services are free for Premium users