In some countries at secondary or high school, there may be two streams of study academic or vocational. what are the advantages of students and society of putting students into two streams at the age of 15?

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today's

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Education widens a person's mental horizon

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assist

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assists

as a weapon in building up the development of

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the child

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a child

. In several nations

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high school, there are two options of study academic and vocational. In my ideology, there are ample of rewards of choosing stream after grade. To feather one's nest, the potential factor behind

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give what is desired or needed, especially support, food or sustenance

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a chance to scholars to build up their

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careers

according to their interest. It acts as a golden opportunity for pupils

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A number of studies

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show

that children must have to focus on only

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a few subjects

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climbs

their immunity system few subjects just act as a treasure house of knowledge. Due to

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, juveniles burn midnight oil to accomplish their target yet, they

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do study around the clock. Plethora of subjects

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a large amount

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of burden which is directly linked to stress and frustration. Moving

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down if learners select their stream as their interest

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Education is lighter than a sword.

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, being a part of society, it is one of both guardians as well as scholars to ponder about their future

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As senior citizens are more experienced yet, students know regarding their interest and future goals

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Yesterday fiction is today's reality.

Tue Mar 10 2020

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In some countries at secondary or high school, there may be two streams of study academic or vocational. what are the advantages of students and society of putting students into two streams at the age of 15?

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Some countries are struggling with an increase rate in crime. Many people think that increasing police on the roads is the only way to reduce crime. To what extent do you agree ?

In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

Some people believe that range of technology currently is increasing gap between rich and poor people. Others think that it is causing opposite . Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, howevr, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In many cities the population is increasing. Some say that the urbanization process denies us knowing our neighbors, and this causes a loss of community sense. What is the main problem with this? What measures can be taken to overcome it?