More and more people prefer to read ebooks rather than paper books.

In the past, there were no ebooks children used to read from printed books,
however
, nowadays students are not interested in reading paper books they prefer to read something from mobile or computers or else they watch television or play mobile games in leisure time. I believe that reading stories from digital books have more advantages than playing indoor games. Learning by reading is important than watching TV and playing games as it is an active activity.
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Firstly, if
children
read
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read, then
then
they would have a better understanding of languages
such
as good pronunciation and vocabulary. It
also
helps them in writing good content
secondly
, ebook-reading can develop a habit of reading so in the future, it creates interest in reading and
hence
a child can focus on the study
as a result
students can get a good score in the exam.
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Sometimes
watching TV and playing games can
also
help children to gain significant knowledge. By playing games the imagination power of students can develop and it helps them to imagine situations,
however
, children spend their valuable time watching cartoons and playing games or mobile and they
can not
can not
cannot
learn essential things from it.
moreover
in addition
Moreover
, watching games and playing games can give rise to health problems
such
as obesity and short-sightedness.
Although
, watching TV and playing games can help children to imagine but it has many drawbacks related to health. In my viewpoint reading ebooks help
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better future as it would develop a habit of reading.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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