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It is often claimed that electronic devices will soon replace paper books.Agree or disagree

#devices #paper #books
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Technology has a very big impact on the
paper
 books now-a-days. They are replacing handbooks by their vast search history. But books being replaced by the devices in
upcoming years
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the upcoming years
is
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are
 still not possible.
Firstly
, technology is growing very
fastly
with rapid movements
quickly
 in current era, and covering every
face
a distinct feature or element in a problem
facet
 of the world. If we compare the phase of getting knowledge from books and from mobiles devices and laptops, there
are
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is
 now less use of books other than
internet
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the internet
 and electronic devices. Because
internet
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the internet
give
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gives
 you very fast result when you search anything. But from
books
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the books
 you have to work very hard to get to the main points which you needed. Some people think that these appliances take over the books because people are now relying too much on them rather than the notepads. Specially new generation is totally focusing on these equipments. But
majority
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a majority
the majority
 still
have
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has
 a big faith
on
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in
 the printed books. They think that nothing can be balanced with these
paper
 work, because
paper
 books have a lot of attraction and you can concentrate easily on them. But in mobiles or laptops, people mostly disturb by internet pages ads and
also
 it can move to somewhere else. You cannot pay attention and waste your time by searching some other material. Internet
also
 give too much results that can confuse you in your works. In our opinion, these modern accessories can be used
alongwith
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along with
 the
paper
 works and books. But totally replacing of them is very difficult because people have
alot
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a lot
 of faith
on
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in
paper
 books rather than technology.

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