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Nowadays more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?

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In recent year, finding a fob is one of the life's competitions. The older generation which is currently working in the organization has to compete with the fresh graduate.
This
 is going to be the issue in the future and
this
 essay will discuss some of the consequences of
this
 issue and solution. Currently, there are too many fresh sage from college and university trying to find a gold after graduating.
On the other hand
, the employees which are working in the company have to emulate with the fresh sage.
This
 situation will make the high
race
 trouble appear,
both
 of two sides will be competing with each other and
this
 condition will create the stress to
both
 sides. In the end, the result from
this
 situation some people on
both
 sides will be unemployed, and the economy is going to face with the unemployment dilemma. According to the situation, if the circumstance still keeps going like
this
, the possible solution will be a drawback. The highly work tournament trouble will be rising between the older generation and fresh graduates.
Also
, the number of unemployment will increase continuously year after year,
this
 is the big influence of the high championship.
Finally
, these are going to affect to the economic trouble. In conclusion, the
race
 between two generations bring several obstacles to social.
For instance
, high
race
 between
both
 age worker, economic question, tension from high
race
.
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