In recent years,
traffic
accidents
have been a noticeable problem not only in Vietnam but
also
throughout the world.
While
a school of thought holds that the rise in the number of
motorbikes
is a major reason, others still believe that what directly results in
this
alarming trend is human errors. From my perspective,
although
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consumption
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lead to
this
issue, man's misbehaviors remain the core of
this
trend.
It is undeniable that more
motorbikes
means that
people
have to struggle with greater congestion, which, indeed,
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their driving experiences negatively.
However
, individuals are not flawless. First and foremost, carelessness
while
driving is one of the biggest causes of transportation
accidents
. To illustrate, despite the obstacles and difficulties
people
may encounter when having a large number of vehicles especially
motorbikes
on the road, they are able to manage if they stay focused and prevent minor
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such
as phones, gossiping, strangers,...
In addition
,
traffic
participants often ignore their
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of transport. It is evident that thanks to the advances
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technology,
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demand of citizens.
Therefore
,
people
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accompanied individuals. Unfortunately,
this
contradicts what
people
usually do on the road.
Another aspect to be discussed is the lack of awareness among
people
. A majority of them are
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of
traffic
regulations and keep violating them constantly because they
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or just refuse to follow the rules.
For example
, some research
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that the most prevalent causes of
traffic
accidents
are speeding and alcohol
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, at approximately 50 % and 15 % respectively.
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considerably by human faults.
Also
, intentional violation is another cause to be examined. To explain, some youngsters in today's society are urged to drive against the rules in order to show off their abilities
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peers and depict their maturity.
According to
a
study, not wearing
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predominantly
predominately
accounts for a lot of
motorbikes
accidents
.
,
this
belief will affect the smooth
traffic
operation
as well as
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.
In conclusion, even though the increase in
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, human faults still play a vital part in transportation
accidents
. It is recommended that we educate
traffic
participants about the importance of safe driving
as well as
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people
against violating
traffic
rules.