Some people think the government should pay for health care and education, but there is no agreement about whether it is the government’s responsibility. What is your opinion?

Healthcare and education are the primary importance to citizens, and many tend to see the both areas as country responsibilities while others hesitate. To a certain point, I firmly believe that
this
must be free of charge throughout the country.
First
of all, the federal budget for people’s learning & development is of great benefit to children, family and the society as a whole. Because some parents struggle to afford the
study
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student
cost with their meagre salary, compared with the
unaffordable
that you have the financial means for
affordable
tuition fees being charged by tertiary institutions. In Vietnam,
for example
, a middle-class family spends approximately 50% income for the monthly school fee for children.
In contrast
, the low-income families, which are only enough to buy food and pay for their monthly bills, their children were limited
to
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in
their potential to poor academic experience. By providing free education to the residents it is hoped that more skilled and educated workers would be created.
Similarly
, access to health care is a basic human right and a measure to ensure a decent standard of living.
In addition
, humans should not have to worry about if they can pay to stay healthy.
For instance
, some patients who could not find the way to cover the hospital cost, they stay home suffering, until it's too late to start treatment. Needless to say, healthcare treatment cost is, in general, expensive to thousands of people destitute.
Furthermore
, a healthy nation is the base of a country and it is a government's responsibility to make the proper medical treatment and service available for all. Government’s financial support is
therefore
required. In conclusion, education and healthy life are two basic needs of every citizen and a government is in fact, formed to make sure no citizen is deprived of his basic needs, and all these must be given importance and unrestricted from all levels of the society.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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