‘Social networking sites such as Facebook and Twitter are observed to have more negative effects than positive being more useful for the criminals than others. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.’

The world has become a global village and the main reason behind
this
globalization is 'readily available
communication
'.
This
fast
communication
has bridged the gaps of continents miraculously. Some people hold the view that social networking sites posses more downsides than their presumed advantages.
However
, I strongly disagree with the narrative and in my essay l am going to explain why social networking sites are playing
vitol
urgently needed; absolutely necessary
vital
role in day to day life of common people at large. The
first
and foremost reason behind the
rejuvinating
the phenomenon of vitality and freshness being restored
rejuvenation
existance
the state or fact of existing
existence
of any social forum is getting people connected with their
family
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families
, friends, peers, alumni or even strangers. The conversation that once took a high paid phone call is now instant away and way cheaper.
Moreover
, these conversations are not limited
to audio
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to, audio
call, but written messages in the form of status update and tweets make people being part of one's minute to minute life.
In addition
, the visual
communication
virtually creates people a part of each
other surrounding
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other, surrounding
, does not matter how afar physically they are at the moment.
For instance
, the recent feature of
facebook
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Facebook
live has enabled me here in Pakistan to watch my cousin
recieving
get something; come into possession of
receiving
post-graduate degree in the US instantly at his convocation ceremony. Another important reason added to the upside of social networking is its ability to make
anything
an unspecified thing, agency, amount, etc.
something
go viral in no time, which helped resolving social, political,
beaurocratic
of or relating to or resembling a bureaucrat or bureaucracy
bureaucratic
vices from the society in
considerable
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considerably
lesser amount of time that once needed substantial background for the
whistle blower
an informant who exposes wrongdoing within an organization in the hope of stopping it
whistleblower
to get into notice. Almost, every government authority has official pages and
twitter
make high-pitched sounds, as of birds
Twitter
accounts to follow that helped in raising
common man issue
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the common man issue
common man issues
and addressed
subsequently
as in
this
age of ultra
communication
, no agency can afford a maligning image on national - international forum. The recent example of
prolong
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prolonged
prolonging
power outage in Karachi city due to rain and public fatality
accidents
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accident
report on social media networks made utility company to take drastic measures to reinforce the network and restore supply in record time. To cap it all, the usefulness of social networking is undeniable in modern day society and its services to each individual irrespective of status, colour, creed and background is unquestionable. So, I strictly disagree
to
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with
the idea of cyber or any scale crime associated with social networks.

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