Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Current
emarging
coming to maturity
emerging
population
and climate challenges around the world clearly state that countries
thoughout
all the way through
throughout
the globe are going to face huge difficulties in coming decades.
Moreover
, it will create major indirect effects in education
also
.
This
essay will describe that
kinds
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kind
of abnormality we are going to witness in upcoming years and it's prevention process with appropriate support.
Firstly
, we are not at all
consious
intentionally conceived
conscious
about environmental balance which helps to keep entire world as a stable condition. Due to various
environemental
of or relating to the external conditions or surroundings
environmental
changes, we are experiencing numerous ups and downs in our daily life. If all of these are going to continue
then
we are going to meet shortage of drinking water and grain, less
rain fall
water falling in drops from vapor condensed in the atmosphere
rainfall
etc. For an example, Corona virus is gradually creating it's
strenght
the property of being physically or mentally strong
strength
over human being. Some of the
part
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parts
of our
countries
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country
has reported
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have reported
the same.
Secondly
, all these developing a
slient
marked by absence of sound
silent
client
but big changes in
education sector
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the education sector
. As per medical science, these differences are responsible for
indiffrent brain develeopment
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the indifferent brain development
indifferent brain develeopment
indifferent brain development
indiffrent brain development
of
child
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children
the child
a child
.
Therefore
, it is creating impact on
education
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the education
of students.
Thirdly
,
population
control has become vital problems in our country. Resulting most of the people are jobless. As per my
openion
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
, government must create
law
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a law
laws
or scheme to control
population which
Accept comma addition
population, which
will ensure a smooth
disctribution
(statistics) an arrangement of values of a variable showing their observed or theoretical frequency of occurrence
distribution
of job among all. In other hand, We have to take care of our environment along with the urbanization. So that in
upcoming years
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the upcoming years
we can have fresh air, organic food for us as well as our
next
generation. In conclusion, looking after our surroundings and
population
is our own task to keep our world green forever.

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