The graph below shows the proportion of differnt materials that were recycled from 1982 to 2010 in a particular country.
Having analysed the bestowed infographic reveals the acquaintance concerning the
ratio
of various materials, namely- paper and cardboard
, glass containers, aluminium cans, plastics
that were recycled between 1982 to 2010.Calibration of units is done in percentage.
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and plastics
Overall
, it is scrutinized that the nominal ratio
of plastic was recycled; however
, a lion's share was taken up by paper and cardboard
.
To accumulate, the initial year, a substantial ratio
of a substantial ratio
was comprised of plastic and cardboard
yet, it was erratic till 1994 later it continued to fall and reached at
a difference of 2% less than starting year. Remove the preposition
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On the contrary
, glass containers showed an opposite trend just as paper and cardboard
with 50% and 60% in 1982 and 2008.
Probing ahead, in starting year, the ratio
of aluminium cans and plastic was negligible nevertheless
, from 1984 a small climb can be seen in both of them. Hereafter, both showed an upward trend till 2010 and Aluminium cans were
accounted for half of the total.Unnecessary verb
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