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There is less social contact between young and old. What are the reasons? What measures can be taken?

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Nowadays, more and more people less social contract between young and old because there are many reasons of which analysing the in the upcoming paragraph and as well as how can solve
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 occur. To embark weather many people believe that there is no social contract with their because they have not my life is very faster and their date and too fast at 3:10 to work and they have no time to work each other so I think
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 is the major religion and social contract between old and young people and young people prefer to technology than men and women prefer to culture. On the flip side Assam are good at there there there is no interest between the old and young people because they tend to study and they have no time like young people tend to study in the evening as well as morning and so I can say that they do not a day do not get a chance to participate in a local conduct. Another word for older people have a many diseases and they have more after because it because the doctor said that to move the year and they do not have to work at home so so so you don't get the opportunity
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