The graph below gives information about changes in the birth and death rates in New Zealand between 1901 and 2101. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line chart below presents the fluctuation

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birth

and

death

rates

in New Zealand from 1901 to 2101.

Overall

, it is evident that there was a steady rise

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death

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fluctuation over a period starting from 1901. As can be seen from the graph, the proportion of the

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was nearly 10,000 and lower than the

birth

for 8,000 from the beginning of the period. It

then

continuously rose for the

next

few years until 2041 it will reach its peak at approximately 60,000 without decrease.

Following

this

, the

death

rates

will be constant until 2101. In the case of the

birth

rates

, the rate quickly increased until it reached its highest point at 66,000 by 1961.

Then

the rate started fluctuating many times

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but mainly continued to drop at 40,000. The year

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2041 will witness a significant decrease

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birth

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death

experiences a stable rise over the

last

period.