transport preferences among young people from different countries

The
chart
shows us the tra
nport pr
move something or somebody around; usually over long distances
transport
eferences among young people from different countries. There are three countries' data's given from Europe, and oth
er one sh
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the other one
ows us the USA's trends in terms of
transportation
preferences among young people.
Firstly
, when we look at the
cha
rt we ca
Accept comma addition
chart, we
n see that car using dramatically differs from all the other two options; mot
orcyle an
a motor vehicle with two wheels and a strong frame
motorcycle
d bicycle preferences for all countries that has been compared except the Germany. For other options of
transportation
, preferences differs in different countries. While Great Britain and France use
s bi
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use
c
ycle fo
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bicycles
r the
second
option of
transportation
, in the USA motorcycle comes as
second
preference. We can easily say
by
express in words
tell
examining the
chart
that, while Eru
pean co
of or relating to or characteristic of Europe or the people of Europe
European
untries prefers the nature-friendly
transport
options after cars, American
youth
prefers motor vehicles more than nature-friendly options. When we exa
mining th
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are examining
examine
e
chart
more precisely country by country, we can say that the car using as
transportation
is mostly popular among French young-population, it is over seventy percentages out of other opi
tons. O
the right to buy or sell property at an agreed price; the right is purchased and if it is not exercised by a stated date the money is forfeited
options
nly about thirty per
cantages of
a proportion in relation to a whole (which is usually the amount per hundred)
percentage
percentages
youth
population uses other
transport
options, the order of oth
er two options li
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the other two options
ne up as bic
ycle an
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a bicycle
d motorcycle, both about ten percentages, not dramatically dif
ferantiated.
made different (especially in the course of development) or shown to be different
differentiated
differentiate
After French, Great Britian and USA comes equally in terms of car using as
tra
nsport am
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a transport
ong you
g pe
(used of living things especially persons) in an early period of life or development or growth
young
ople, both countries use
s ca
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use
rs as
transportation
at the same
percentage
, about %60. While bicycling comes
secondly
at the Great Britian, thirty
percentage
among
youth
population, in USA motorcycle being preferred as much as the preference of bicycling in Great Britian; %30. We can say that over half
percentage
of young people using cars as
transportation
in France, Great Britain and the USA. There's an exception about Germany. Among young people in Germany, we can see that the cars are not the
first
option, fou
rty pe
being ten more than thirty
forty
rcent of
youth
uses cars as
tra
nsport vehicle wh
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a transport vehicle
ile over fou
rty
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a forty percentage
forty percentage
percentage
of them use bcy
cle.
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a bicycle
bicycle
bicycles
cycle
The dis
trubition be
(statistics) an arrangement of values of a variable showing their observed or theoretical frequency of occurrence
distribution
tween pre
fences of
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the preferences
preferences
transport
vehicles is more normal than the other countries that has been given in the
chart
. Nature friendly
transportation
seems more general in Germany. In the
chart
we can easily see that the Germany is the only country in terms of using different types of tra
nsportaion as
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
much as cars; more traditional ones.

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