The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The two maps show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The given maps illustrate the difference in an
isle
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aisle
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that came after refurbishment in a few visitor’s places. Before
establishment
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its establishment
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, the island was situated in the mid of the ocean,
while
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there was a beach on the left corner of the island.
However
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, a few trees were seen on both sides of the land with no population. During construction, a restaurant is made on the upper side of the area and its reception exists in the centre of the islet.
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that, there is a vehicle track between the restaurant and reception that connects them. On either side of the reception, there is an accommodation area where houses are linked with pave.
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, new development is done in the form of the pier through which people can approach the ships with ease. Onwards,
the
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boats are available which can help the people to reach a rail of 100 meters.
Overall
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, it is observed that the island was not in
use
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of
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by
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the public because of the lack of basic facilities that are now available after construction

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Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Development
  • Infrastructure
  • Accommodation
  • Recreational areas
  • Chalets
  • Reception area
  • Restaurant
  • Footpaths
  • Vehicular tracks
  • Pier
  • Natural landscape
  • Constructed facilities
  • Tourist attractions
  • Preservation
  • Transport access
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