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Scientists believe that computer become more intelligent than human . Some people believe that it is a positive development ,other think that is a negative development .Discuss both the view and give your opinion .

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Technology plays a major role is in modern lifestyle, but it has some
drawbackAnd
 one of them is smart
computer
 some people believe
that Is
 the positive in fact in our society whereas, others believe that it have a more negative effect.
This
 essay will highlight that the negative of
this
 approach surpass the positive of
this
 approach. There are myriad things to be shared with the
first
 statement
.
Accept space
.
First
 and foremost
,
Accept space
,
 it creates unemployment
.
Accept space
.
 Many a company replaces their staff with the computers
.
Accept space
.
For example
, many information technology companies will relays on
computer
Suggestion
the computer
a computer
computers
 because it will do work without rest and salaries
.
Accept space
.
Besides
this
,
Accept space
,
 many classes are replaced by a smart class. Smart computers Repeat one module more than
hundred times
Suggestion
a hundred times
, but it cannot customise the module according to the student level so it will create bigger issues on students academics
.
Accept space
.
 I would like to add some points in order to bolster my opinion
.
Accept space
.
 Smart
computer
also increase
Suggestion
also increases
 a cyber crime
such
 as online fraud.
On the other hand
,
Accept space
,
 it is beneficial in some cases. Smart
computer
are used
Suggestion
is used
 for Outer space monitoring.
For instance
, many outer space research companies use
computer
 for monitoring on the moon. In conclusion
,
Accept space
,
 it can be said that technology Technology has mix outcome
.
Accept space
.
However
, I believe that negative of smart
computer
 surpassed positive of
this
.
Accept space
.

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