Present a written argument to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The 21st century has begun. What changes do you think this new century will bring? Use examples and details in your answer.

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Dear Mr.Reader, Subject: New Prospects of the 21st
century
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I would like to bring your kind attention about few key achievement about to be reality, that 21st
century
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expected to bring to us.
First
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, you had mentioned about
nano
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technology
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in your book mentioning that it would take few more years to achieve, but you have not mentioned about the reliable source of
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information.
Second
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, the topic does not deserve to be acceptable, since it has inconsistent information,
for example
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, somewhere it was given
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nano
the branch of engineering that deals with things smaller than 100 nanometers (especially with the manipulation of individual molecules)
nanotechnology
technology
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could be used for power production,
on the other hand
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nano
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technology
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will harm
human being
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a human being
in the form of radioactive rays. Here,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
want to register a note, the
nano
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technology
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has reached far more advanced, compared to the earlier stages of its discovery. The new
century
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has begun and we are welcoming with existing technologies,
such
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as Artificial Intelligence, driver less car, mobile broadband, which needs
further
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refinement and it has bright possibilities to achieve. As an Introduction, twenty
first
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century
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will provide us
furthermore
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advancement in AI and flying taxi's. It can reduce usage of fossil fuel,
that is
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considered as one of source of environmental issues.
Furthermore
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, mobile phone can get advanced,
such
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as flexible screens / screen speaker and fast charging. Rocket science
also
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considered as one of the major focuses on 21st
century
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, where rocket can send beyond the moon. Global positioning system
also
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expected to get advanced, as it can provide views of the street, but you have mentioned, it is one if the saturated field and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
stand against your idea. It is getting updated,
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next
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the next century
century
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will bring more advancement. I hope the above mentioned point can provide you idea to support my points and
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
am happy to make a presentation at any time, if you require. Thank you.

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