A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion
People
have different views about treatment
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the treatment
animals
. While
there are some good arguments in favour of treating animals
in the same way humans
are, I believe that it is better use
them as we desire for food and medical research. There are certain Add the particle
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people
in society which
claim that Correct pronoun usage
who
animals
should be treated fairly by human beings. The reason is they are also
living creatures, and they have the same feelings like
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as
humans
, such
as happiness, pain, and so on. Therefore
, they deserve the
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to the
treatment
in the right way. Replace the word
treated
Moreover
, killing animals
for human needs may destroy the balance of nature. Because,
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animals
have their own ways of population control and harmful human activities are not morally acceptable. On the other hand
, some individuals argue that animals
are created to fulfil human needs. Firstly
, animals
are important as food sources. They provide people
nutrition
, which is essential for living. Change preposition
with nutrition
For instance
, sheep are consumed because of being high in protein Secondly
, animal research brings in manifold benefits for human life, especially in education. Results from animal studies are crucial for closing knowledge gaps about health and disease in both humans
and animals
. Understanding cell and organ function help
researchers design experiments to test new treatments in Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
people
. For example
, several new drugs are being tested in some mice or monkeys before they are being
tested on human beings. In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against Unnecessary verb
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treatment
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the treatment
animals
. However
, it seems to me that animals
have the same rights as humans
and deserve to be treated fairly.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion