A growing number of people feel that animals should not be exploited by people and that they should have the same rights as humans, while others argue that humans must employ animals to satisfy their various needs, including uses for food and research. Discuss both views and give your opinion
People
have different views about Use synonyms
treatment
of Add an article
the treatment
animals
. Use synonyms
While
there are some good arguments in favour of treating Linking Words
animals
in the same way Use synonyms
humans
are, I believe that it is better Use synonyms
use
them as we desire for food and medical research. There are certain Add the particle
to use
people
in society Use synonyms
which
claim that Correct pronoun usage
who
animals
should be treated fairly by human beings. The reason is they are Use synonyms
also
living creatures, and they have the same feelings Linking Words
like
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as
humans
, Use synonyms
such
as happiness, pain, and so on. Linking Words
Therefore
, they deserve Linking Words
the
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to the
treatment
in the right way. Replace the word
treated
Moreover
, killing Linking Words
animals
for human needs may destroy the balance of nature. BecauseUse synonyms
,
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apply
animals
have their own ways of population control and harmful human activities are not morally acceptable. Use synonyms
On the other hand
, some individuals argue that Linking Words
animals
are created to fulfil human needs. Use synonyms
Firstly
, Linking Words
animals
are important as food sources. They provide Use synonyms
people
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nutrition
, which is essential for living. Change preposition
with nutrition
For instance
, sheep are consumed because of being high in protein Linking Words
Secondly
, animal research brings in manifold benefits for human life, especially in education. Results from animal studies are crucial for closing knowledge gaps about health and disease in both Linking Words
humans
and Use synonyms
animals
. Understanding cell and organ function Use synonyms
help
researchers design experiments to test new treatments in Correct subject-verb agreement
helps
people
. Use synonyms
For example
, several new drugs are being tested in some mice or monkeys before they are Linking Words
being
tested on human beings. In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against Unnecessary verb
apply
treatment
of Add an article
the treatment
animals
. Use synonyms
However
, it seems to me that Linking Words
animals
have the same rights as Use synonyms
humans
and deserve to be treated fairly.Use synonyms
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Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
The easiest way to score well on the IELTS Task 2 writing portion is to structure your writing in a solid essay format.
A strong argument essay structure can be split up into 4 paragraphs, each containing 4 sentences (except the conclusion paragraph, which only contains 3 sentences).
Stick to this essay structure:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion