the only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, education or shopping. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some scientists and experts believe that one solution

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to

traffic jams is by

diminshing

becoming smaller or less or appearing to do so

diminishing

the need of people to travel whether to go to work or go to educational facilities.I strongly object with

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opinion for the reasons I will mention.I reckon that there are better ways to prevent traffic difficulties that are more reliable.

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the population

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expansion;

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, it seems unrealistic to decreas

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the act of going from one place to another

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e,in Egypt, and due to the huge rise in population

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an new distant capital has been built to include all the governmental facilities and ministri

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register formally as a participant or member

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roll their children in expensive private schools so they

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in a vertical position; not sloping

upright

ught in a ni

fty enviro

the totality of surrounding conditions

environment

ment.Though some of them might be situated in a place far away from home.Generally talking, no one on Earth can stop them from doing so

as trave

the act of going from one place to another

travelling

ling is a human right that must be accepted and followed.

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eover,the vast technological advancement has

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the act of going from one place to another

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agile,which resulted

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the act of going from one place to another

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a bitter quarrel between two parties

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the act of going from one place to another

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the act of going from one place to another

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raveling has become an essential need.