Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat. Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Dear Sujeet, I am writing

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letter to apologize for disturbing you

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the noise which comes from my house. Actually, My son is three years old and he just learnt to walk. As our apartment is above yours that’s the reason when he runs from one side to another noise comes which disturbs you all. I always try to stop him but you know kids. I do really apologize for disturbing you as I can understand how annoying it is sometimes when we try to sleep or when we are tried or doing so important work. I’ll do my best to not give you another chance of complaint. I have planned and already spoke we one of the

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to put carpet on the floors of my apartment so that the noise doesn’t

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have already told my wife regarding

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issue so she will

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take care of

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I do again apologize and promise

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won’t happen again. Best Regards, Maninderpal.

Tue Mar 10 2020

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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