You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter: explain your situation describe your problems tell him/her when you think you can start Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I was supposed to start working with your company from

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week, but some problems are holding me back on the same.

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is because my previous employer is putting me in a strange situation, and not releasing me.

Firstly

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, they are not accepting the handover provided by me, mentioning irrelevant reasons.

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is causing me to extend the work term with them.

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, the Human Resource Department is delaying my settlement. Since I was working with them for a span of more than 10 years, they owe me a reasonably large sum, with which I had planned to close my car loan. I think it will take a minimum duration of at least 2 more weeks for me to solve these problems.

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, I appreciate

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you could allow me to delay my joining date for the above term. I hope you will accept

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letter and extend me your support on the matter. Yours faithfully, Ajin P Abraham

Tue Mar 10 2020

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

164 words

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