Some people believe that it is correct. What do you believe?

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I usually prefer to
contact
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with them via an online application
such
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as
whatsapp
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wasps
wasp
a wasp
, because it is easy to use and the only thing you need to use
whatsapp
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is to have an internet connection on your phone. Yes, I prefer different communication ways with different people.
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for
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For
example, if I need to
contact
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with my professors, it should be formal so I prefer to send an e-mail to them rather than calling them
Yes I
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Yes, I
find easy to keep in
contact
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with both my family and my friends. There are a lot of easy communication ways to keep in
contact
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. You just need to spare
time
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for them. They used to get in
contact
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with letters or via phone and fax in the past, but now we have smart phones and an internet connection
on
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with
to
for
them, so there are more and easier ways to get in
contact
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. I can talk about
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last halloween party
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the last Halloween party
last Halloween party
that I went to.
Actually i
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Actually, I
Actually I
don'
t
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celebrate
halloween
the evening before All Saints' Day; often devoted to pranks played by young people
Halloween
, because it is childish to me, but my
friend
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insisted on me attending the party, and it was not as bad as I thought. I had
oppurtunity
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the opportunity
opportunity
an opportunity
opportunities
to spend some
time
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with my friends who I haven'
t
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seen for a long
time
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. It took place at my
friend
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's home. There were no many people, only my
friend
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, our common friends and some people who are my
friend
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's friends. We had some drinks and we chatted with each others. It was a nice night People generally are not able to see their beloved
ones often,
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ones, often
because of the fact that most of them work or study
in
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on
weekdays, and they prefer to spend weekends to relax and deal with responsibilities, so they organise family parties to gather, to spend some
time
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together I don'
t
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think people spend a lot of money on family parties in my country unless they are so rich or wasteful. I don'
t
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think it is a good trend, because the important thing in family parties is not how much you spend for
it but
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it, but
how much quality
time
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you can spend with your beloved ones I think family parties are more formal, because in family parties there are some people that you don'
t
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know well, that you are not very comfortable with them,
such
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as your cousins who you haven'
t
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spend
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spent
much
time
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in the past, but
in
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at
a party given by your friends it is likely to be more informal, because
firends
a person you know well and regard with affection and trust
friends
mean someone who you are comfortable with.

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