Some people become famous in their early age. Is it bad or good? Discuss and give your opinion. Write a letter to your manager to request setting up a cafeteria for the staffs. In your letter, you should tell: what you heard about the inconvenience from the staffs how you feel about it what suggestion you can give

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Dear sir/madam, I am writing

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letter about my suggestion to open a cafeteria in our organization. As you know, there is no canteen in our vicinity;

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, staff members have to drive away to get their lunch.

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, they have to struggle to beat the traffic daily and reach

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on time.

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, there is no

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place in an office where employees can relax and share their ideas.

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, they have the issue of budget. According to me, eating lunch at a desk means sitting for long periods which deprive to thing some new exotic ideas and diminishes productivity and surges stress level.

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, it is necessary to have a cafeteria in our workplace so that the workers can save their time and energy and can get relaxed and rejuvenate themselves. In my opinion, if management allows, a cafeteria can be opened near our parking area on the front side of the office as there are plenty of areas is available. I hope my suggestion is considered positive.

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Faithfully,

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Tue Mar 10 2020

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