Some people think that countries should limit the amount of food that they import and mainly eat products from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Over the recent years, the topic of
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importation has become a main generator of controversy. With the concern being expressed over whether nations ought to industrialize domestic
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and
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as little as possible, I came to an understanding that it is impossible for a country to self-produce aliment for the whole population and some types of meals are literally infeasible to be found without importing from abroad. First of all, I opine that some products for foods are simply inaccessible in some places.
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mainly because each country has different geographic and weather
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and
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it is
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that some of the items require importing.
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, some exotic
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fruits
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can only be grown in tropical regions
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as the Bahamas and Maldives. Even though
food
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import
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includes transportation costs, taxation and so on, it is undeniable that
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import
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cost has already declined due
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trade and globalisation.
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, I
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consider that by cutting meal imports, a country is prone to have serious economic and diplomatic problems. In its broadest sense, having discontinued importation, one is
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imparting its foreign trade link to other nations, losing potential abroad markets for exporting as well.
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nation that has to buy something from other countries, definitely can find what to propose in its own turn.
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, Uzbekistan can export cotton to countries like Ecuador and
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bananas from them
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.
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, it goes without saying that imported
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is vital in contributing
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meal
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.
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, I once again reaffirm my position that
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import
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of
food
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should be embraced due
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contribution to the variety of daily products and for the benefit of the global economy.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • domestically produced food
  • agricultural sector
  • carbon footprint
  • greenhouse gas emissions
  • food security
  • global market fluctuations
  • trade disputes
  • local food production
  • dietary variety
  • international trade relations
  • retaliation
  • exports
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