Some people think that countries should limit the amount of food that they import and mainly eat products from their own country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Over the recent years, the topic of
food
importation has become a main generator of controversy. With the concern being expressed over whether nations ought to industrialize domestic food
and import
as little as possible, I came to an understanding that it is impossible for a country to self-produce aliment for the whole population and some types of meals are literally infeasible to be found without importing from abroad.
First of all, I opine that some products for foods are simply inaccessible in some places. That is
mainly because each country has different geographic and weather condition
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conditions
thus
it is evitable
that some of the items require importing. Correct your spelling
inevitable
For example
, some exotic fruit
can only be grown in tropical regions Fix the agreement mistake
fruits
such
as the Bahamas and Maldives. Even though food
import
includes transportation costs, taxation and so on, it is undeniable that food
import
cost has already declined due free
trade and globalisation.
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to free
Secondly
, I also
consider that by cutting meal imports, a country is prone to have serious economic and diplomatic problems. In its broadest sense, having discontinued importation, one is also
imparting its foreign trade link to other nations, losing potential abroad markets for exporting as well. Since any
nation that has to buy something from other countries, definitely can find what to propose in its own turn. Change preposition
Any
For example
, Uzbekistan can export cotton to countries like Ecuador and import
bananas from them instead
. Thus
, it goes without saying that imported food
is vital in contributing sufficient
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to sufficient
meal
.
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meals
To conclude
, I once again reaffirm my position that import
of Correct article usage
the import
food
should be embraced due its
contribution to the variety of daily products and for the benefit of the global economy.Change preposition
to its
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