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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

#year #languages #people #life #world
Languages are the medium of communication
firstly
, the voice of an infant comes from the mother, which is called as mother tongue
in addition
 to, people learn from the surroundings, peers, friends etc. Syntax and semantics of voice will be designed by the professional native speakers. Some languages will abandon its usage because of people's unawareness. The idea of voice complication will start from school children, they feel that learning new languages is the difficult task. They will feel shy to use the new
speech
. Native speakers shouldn't turn to change their
speech
 because feelings can be better expressed by the native languages. People should use wide spread
speech
 as a medium of communication and keep the native
speech
 as the primary one to self communicate and to keep the life of its existence.
Finally
, languages shouldn't die
out but
Accept comma addition
out, but
 should minimize
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 usage depending on
situation
Suggestion
the situation
.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Linguistic diversity
  • Cultural heritage
  • Language extinction
  • Communication barrier
  • Linguistic imperialism
  • Endangered languages
  • Language revitalization
  • Monolingual
  • Multilingual
  • Language preservation
  • Homogenization
  • Language policy
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Intangible heritage
  • Indigenous languages
  • Globalization
  • Dialects
  • Localization
  • Language documentation
  • Digital archiving
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