More and more people nowadays are learning on the Internet of going to class. What are the advantages of learning online? Do you think online learning can totally replace the classroom learning?

Online learning is getting famous every year and the percentage of people who prefer studying online over going to classes is increasing. Most of the colleges and universities are now offering most of their courses online and students are finding
this
method reliable. In fact, studying remotely is more time and money
efficient
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efficiently
.
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.
Even though, studying online is preferable way for
educators but
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educators, but
we can’t ignore the fact that theirs some students who still have
preference
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a preference
for in-class lectures.
First
of all, students can save
alot
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a lot
of hours travelling to attend their classes by studying online.
For example
,
student
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a student
who works full time or part-time will have the freedom to schedule his entire day by saving the commute time.Eventually, that's one of the main cons for taking online classes.
Secondly
, transportation prices are increasing every day due to many factors
such
as fuel prices. All in all, studying over the internet will save the daily commute.
For example
,
instead
of travelling
everyday
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every day
to school the student is having the options to study at home without spending any penny on public or private
transporation
a facility consisting of the means and equipment necessary for the movement of passengers or goods
transportation
. To conclude, the advantages of studying remotely are more than attending in-class lectures.
Nevertheless
, these facts are not enough to make the only way of learning is online.In my opinion, learning online is more
convienient
suited to your comfort or purpose or needs
convenient
and
effective but
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effective, but
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I
won't be the only method for students to get
education
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an education
.
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