Most people accept that we now live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that this is beneficial. To what extent is globalisation a positive or negative development?

Thanks to the development of technology, scientific and advance in international cooperation, it is undeniable that we are living in

globalisation

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a globalised world

globalised world

globalising world

world

where

trade

, transport and even cultures are interconnected between countries in all over the

world

. While some people may criticise

its

the thing named or in question

it

beneficial, I believe that globalisation’s advantages

are far more outweigh

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have far more outweighed

the disadvantages. The highest merit of globalization is that it fosters international

trade

, creates more jobs and increases efficiency in all over the

world

. Each country will concentrate on its internal resource advantages, become experts in its fields and

then

trade

to

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with

other countries which are scarcity of these resources.

For example

,

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the iPhone

iPhone

IPhone

will develop innovation ideas and produce

mainboard

to move or cause to move in a sinuous, spiral, or circular course

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in its home

country

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country, then

then

assemble most of its body in

under-developed

relating to societies in which capital needed to industrialize is in short supply

underdeveloped

countries where

availability

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the availability

of huge human resource makes it suitable for intensive labour works

such

as mass production lines.

As a result

, processing partly in poorer areas would help to solve employment concern in

such

dense population countries and consumers around the

world

would be benefit from products with reasonable price. The downside of

this

global economy is its interdependence on each other. One crisis in a small territory can spread to the whole

world

. Corona virus outbreak currently in China is an appealing example. The virus rapidly spread to other countries due to high mobility of

this

globalised

world

threatening the worldwide health.

Furthermore

, in an attempt to control the widespread of the epidemic, China government has halted its

trade

with others. It affects the global manufacturing chain as a large amount of input raw materials and assemble parts are being produced in China. To sum up, every coin has two sides. Given the local crisis affecting the whole

world

usually is short-run, globalization in overall has improved human life remarkably. Some people think physical strength is important for success in sport, while other people

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think

that mental strength is more important. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.