Write a letter to your friend who is moving to a new home. 1. You have time to help her 2. How can you help her move? 3. Ask questions about new home?

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Dear Priya, Hope

this

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letter brings you good health and wealth. I heard from Sandra that you are moving to

new

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a new

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home

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near to AlNadha Lulu park in Sharjah. I hope you are excited to shift to the new location. I’m glad to help you to move your

things

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from

old

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your old

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home

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new

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your new

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home

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. I’ll be free on Saturday and Sunday and heard from Sandra that you

also

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shifting on weekend. I’ll come to your

home

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on weekend and will do the packing together. I’ve seen some videos

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youtube about packing

things

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and moving to other locations.

That

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was

easy

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an easy

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and simple

steps

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which we follow it will be

time saving

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time-saving

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process for us to move

things

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Also

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, we can use our own car to relocate as Sandra

also

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coming to give a hand so with 3 cars including your’s we can shift. To know about the place and get the

things

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to correct location share me your new flat address.

Also

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, give me the Google map location and inform the security if any before we bring your household items

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so that we can enter without any trouble. I hope to see you soon and

awaiting

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for

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apply

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your reply. Best wishes Saru

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
11
Grammar mistakes
detected issues

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

204 words

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Write a letter to your friend who is moving to a new home. 1. You have time to help her 2. How can you help her move? 3. Ask questions about new home?

Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

in some culture the parents arrange marriage for their children but in others people choose their own marriage partner. What are the advantages and disadvantages of each system?

Some people believe that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communications has had a negative effect on young people’s reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. How true is this statement? Are there any other parties that should be responsible for this?