You hired a car from a company, while. While you were driving you had a small accident. Write a letter to the company to explain it. In your letter: • when and where you hired it • describe how the accident happened • what kind of action did you take after the accident

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I hired a
car
from your company and met with a small accident. I am living in Bracknell and since my
car
has been to maintenance, I rented a Volkswagen Polo Sedan type
car
from Zoom Cars in
Bracknell
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branch on 1st March 2020 at 10 a.m. for my weekend shopping. I parked the
car
at
Morison
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supermarket parking lot, while I went
for
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shopping. After my purchase, I returned to the
car
and saw that the
car
was damaged
on
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the trunk. When I checked with the security, I was informed that the
car
was hit by another
car
while being taking out from the parking. Immediately, I called the police and
lodge
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a complaint against the incident.
Also
, I received
the
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copy of the complaint.
Further
, I made a call to the insurance company and explained the situation and requested to take the
car
to
nearest
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workshop. Herewith, I have enclosed
the
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copy of the complaint and insurance claim number for your reference. I request you to take the necessary actions
further
. Yours faithfully, Jane Lavallette.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • rented
  • agreement number
  • accident
  • incident
  • collision
  • damage
  • fault
  • insurance
  • liability
  • emergency services
  • report
  • evidence
  • witnesses
  • contact details
  • repair
  • compensation
  • notify
  • immediate action
  • circumstances
  • chronological order
  • weather conditions
  • traffic
  • cooperate
  • return
  • reference number
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