You recently bought an oven for your kitchen but it does not work. You called up the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter: • describe the problem with the oven • explain what happened when you called up the shop • State what you would like the manager to do

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction about buying an
oven
from your shop and I want to replace it with a new one.
Last
week, I purchased a Samsung highly advanced
oven
from your Ericsson Avenue
store
. After bringing
to
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home, I switched on the
oven
to use, but the timer press button was not functioning. I was panicked and made a call to your
store
but there was no proper reply. After a number of trials, a staff of your
store
replied me that they are not responsible for the problems arise after taking the product home. Since
then
I have been in an
extreme
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stressed situation. I would like you to replace
this
damaged
oven
with a new one as
,
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I have
warranty
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for three years. I am
also
attaching
the
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copy of
receipt
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to facilitate the change of the appliance.
Further
, I hope you
to
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improve customer service provided at your
store
to give
a prompt and valid replies
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to customer. I am eagerly waiting for your prompt service regarding
this
complaint. Yours faithfully, Jane Lavallette
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