You recently bought an oven for your kitchen but it does not work. You called up the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter: • describe the problem with the oven • explain what happened when you called up the shop • State what you would like the manager to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to express my dissatisfaction about buying an oven
from your shop and I want to replace it with a new one.
Last
week, I purchased a Samsung highly advanced oven
from your Ericsson Avenue store
. After bringing to
home, I switched on the Correct your spelling
it
oven
to use, but the timer press button was not functioning.
I was panicked and made a call to your store
but there was no proper reply. After a number of trials, a staff of your store
replied me that they are not responsible for the problems arise after taking the product home. Since then
I have been in an extreme
stressed situation.
I would like you to replace Replace the word
extremely
this
damaged oven
with a new one as,
I have Remove the comma
apply
warranty
for three years. I am Add an article
a warranty
also
attaching the
copy of Correct article usage
a
receipt
to facilitate the change of the appliance. Add an article
the receipt
Further
, I hope you to
improve customer service provided at your Fix the infinitive
apply
store
to give a prompt and valid replies
to customer.
I am eagerly waiting for your prompt service regarding Correct the article-noun agreement
a prompt and valid reply
prompt and valid replies
this
complaint.
Yours faithfully,
Jane LavalletteSubmitted by kamalakumaran.s on
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